As some may have seen (or not ), I've been going through my story and doing some major touch-ups - generally fixing a few small typos or the way things are otherwise executed - however, I'm still debating the whole "chop every segment into smaller segments" for the sake of making it more pleasant to read.

If anyone has feedback on this, it'd be greatly appreciated if you share it! I really don't know if this is a necessary step or not. I personally don't take a whole lot of time to read any of the segments, but then I read naturally fast on top of knowing what happens, so my reading rate on it is likely quite biased. Hmm...

HOLY CRAP PART 4 IS LONG No wonder people stop reading at this part, hahaha.